Look up at the starSparkling in the sky
Lighting my path
At a place so high
Flowing with the Milky Way
Like a soft, gentle breeze
Oh, Star, you’re a one
So delightful to see
When I’m lost in the dark
That continues on and on
Your single ray of light
Becomes my brightest lantern
So light my way, my friend,
Until I reach the end.
HI, Eun Hye. I'm Chanjung, your writing TA. I think your ode is one of the best among GLPS students. I enjoyed reading this ode very much because of its successful portrayal of star as your guide and smoothness of flow. You must have a great and rare talent in writing poems like this. I hope you continue writing some more poems on your own and I wish the best of luck for the rest of writing class.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful ode! I agree with Chanjung!
ReplyDeleteWow. Just wow.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this.
You have a talent! :)